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Dear Sir or Mardam, I am writing to coplain about the hairdryer I recently order from your store. When I order the hairdryer two weeks ago, your store said they would delivier it in six days. After six days, I called your store and they told me it would arrive imediately. However, it was another six days before it arived. When I received the item, I checked and I found that it was not working. I can not turn on it. I called your store, one of your staff, who asured me that the hairdryer would be replaced within 48 hours. After 48 hours, I called her again and she told me that it would take a few days to fix it. I asked the reason but she did not answer. Therefore, I am returning the hairdryer. Please send me a refund for the amount I paid. Your faithfully, Lisa
Dear Sir or
Mardam
,

I am writing to
coplain
about the hairdryer I recently order from your store.

When I order the hairdryer two weeks ago, your store said they would
delivier
it in six days. After six days, I called your
store and
they
told
me it would arrive
imediately
.
However
, it was another six days
before
it
arived
.

When I received the item, I
checked
and I found that it was not working. I can not turn on it. I called your store, one of your staff, who
asured
me that the hairdryer would
be replaced
within 48 hours. After 48 hours, I called her
again and
she
told
me that it would take a few days to
fix
it. I asked the reason
but
she did not answer.

Therefore
, I am returning the hairdryer.
Please
send
me a refund for the amount I paid.

Your
faithfully
,

Lisa
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IELTS letter write a letter of complaint

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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