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Dear, Miss Duyen. My name is Nguyen Do Doan Thuy. I am a sophomore majoring in International Business and English Linguistics at Hoa Sen University. I just heard that your academy is looking for two positions: Teaching and Translating from Mr. Son. Therefore, I would like to know more information and how to apply for these positions. Especially the position of the translator.  It is extremely wonderful if I get this opportunity. In addition, I want to say that "Have a nice day, Miss Duyen "
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.

My name is Nguyen Do
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. I am a sophomore majoring in International Business and English Linguistics at
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Sen University.

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heard that your academy is looking for two positions: Teaching and Translating from Mr. Son.
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Have a nice day, Miss
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4 paragraphs
83 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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