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Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: describe the problem with the dog explain why it is important for you to sleep outline what your neighbors could do about the situation

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: describe the problem with the dog explain why it is important for you to sleep outline what your neighbors could do about the situation lN6b
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Adams, I am Marine, your next-door neighbor. I am writing to express my annoyance with your dog that was awfully noisy last night. As your pet was barking the whole night, I was not able to sleep at all. As you know, I am working in a hospital as a surgeon. Having said that I need to be well rested before the surgeries. As a result of not being able to sleep and have a rest last night, I was very tired in the morning and was not able to concentrate on my daily work routine. I reckon it could be useful to have long walks with your dog in the evenings. In this case, the pet will be tired and will sleep at night instead of being active and yelping aloud. I hope there will be no need to write to you about this case again in the future. Otherwise, note that I will take further actions to send a complaint to the apartment management. Regards, Marine
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Adams,

I am Marine, your
next
-door neighbor. I am writing to express my annoyance with your dog that was awfully noisy last
night
. As your pet was barking the whole
night
, I was not able to sleep at all.

As you know, I am working in a hospital as a surgeon. Having said that I need to be well rested
before
the surgeries.
As a result
of not being able to sleep and have a rest last
night
, I was
very
tired in the morning and was not able to concentrate on my daily work routine.

I reckon it could be useful to have long walks with your dog in the evenings.
In this case
, the pet will
be tired
and will sleep at
night
instead
of being active and yelping aloud.

I hope there will be no need to write to you about this case again in the future.
Otherwise
, note that I will take
further
actions to
send
a complaint to the apartment management.

Regards,

Marine
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: describe the problem with the dog explain why it is important for you to sleep outline what your neighbors could do about the situation

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
171 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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