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Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: describe the problem with the dog explain why it is important for you to sleep outline what your neighbors could do about the situation

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: describe the problem with the dog explain why it is important for you to sleep outline what your neighbors could do about the situation lN6b

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Adams, I am Marine, your next-door neighbor. I am writing to express my annoyance with your dog that was awfully noisy last night. As your pet was barking the whole night, I was not able to sleep at all. As you know, I am working in a hospital as a surgeon. Having said that I need to be well rested before the surgeries. As a result of not being able to sleep and have a rest last night, I was very tired in the morning and was not able to concentrate on my daily work routine. I reckon it could be useful to have long walks with your dog in the evenings. In this case, the pet will be tired and will sleep at night instead of being active and yelping aloud. I hope there will be no need to write to you about this case again in the future. Otherwise, note that I will take further actions to send a complaint to the apartment management. Regards, Marine

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Adams,

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-door neighbor. I am writing to express my annoyance with your dog that was awfully noisy last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
. As your pet was barking the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
, I was not able to sleep at all.

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before
 the surgeries. As a result
 of not being able to sleep and have a rest last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
, I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 tired in the morning and was not able to concentrate on my daily work routine.

I reckon it could be useful to have long walks with your dog in the evenings. In this case
, the pet will be tired
 and will sleep at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
instead
 of being active and yelping aloud.

I hope there will be no need to write to you about this case again in the future. Otherwise
, note that I will take further
 actions to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a complaint to the apartment management.

Regards,

Marine

IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: describe the problem with the dog explain why it is important for you to sleep outline what your neighbors could do about the situation

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

171 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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