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writing an letter to the restaurant owner that the noise bother your life and make suggestions.

writing an letter to the restaurant owner that the noise bother your life and make suggestions. QLK69
Hi my neighbour, I’m writing this letter to inform you that the noise of your restaurant affecting my daily life seriously. To lower down the noise and maintain the operation of your business at the same time. I want to provide some suggestions. Please consider the advice below: Change the time of those noise-making activities to an acceptable time. For example, Monday to Friday, please do those events in the day time. The reason is I will be out for work. The noise won’t bother me. At the night time on the workday, please stop those annoying noise creating jobs. And on the weekend, please shift the working time of those activities to the afternoon. If those above suggested time doesn’t fit your schedule, please contact me, and we can negotiate later. If you have any other method to lower down the noise to an acceptable zone instead of changing the shift time, it is also bearable. In this situation, please let me know your decision. Solving this issue is very urgent for me. Please act as soon as possible. For negotiation, I will be available anytime. Unsolved problems will not be allowable. Asking for help from the law firm or government-related institutions will be the act I will do at this point. Hopefully, this won’t happen. Thanks a lot, Katherine
Hi my
neighbour
,

I’m writing this letter to inform you that the
noise
of your restaurant affecting my daily life
seriously
.

To lower down the
noise
and maintain the operation of your business at the same
time
. I want to provide
some
suggestions.
Please
consider the advice below:

Change
the
time
of those noise-making activities to an acceptable time.

For example
, Monday to Friday,
please
do those
events
in the day
time
. The reason is I will be out for work. The
noise
won’t bother me. At the night
time
on the workday,
please
stop
those annoying
noise
creating jobs. And on the weekend,
please
shift the working
time
of those activities to the afternoon.

If those above suggested
time
doesn’t fit your schedule,
please
contact me, and we can negotiate later.

If you have any other method to lower down the
noise
to an acceptable zone
instead
of changing the shift
time
, it is
also
bearable. In this situation,
please
let
me know your decision.

Solving this issue is
very
urgent for me.
Please
act as
soon
as possible. For negotiation, I will be available anytime.

Unsolved problems will not be allowable. Asking for
help
from the law firm or
government
-related institutions will be the act I will do at this point.
Hopefully
, this won’t happen.

Thanks a lot,

Katherine
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IELTS letter writing an letter to the restaurant owner that the noise bother your life and make suggestions.

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  American English
11 paragraphs
220 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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