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Write a letter to your neighbour for excessive noise

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Excessive Noise Dear Johnny and Mary, It has been reported, and documented, that excessive noise and disturbance has been coming from your rented premises at 1234 Elm, unit 52, (describe, giving times/details). It Is absolutely essential that all residents respect the right to quite enjoyment of their neighbors, a right that is protected by law and by the covenants of your lease. I ask that you respect the concerns of your neighbors and control the noise levels generated within your rented premises. If you do not do so, you will be in violation of your lease, and with local law, but more importantly, you will be disrupting the quite enjoyment of your neighbors. Thank you in advance for your cooperation. Justin Dahood
Excessive Noise

Dear Johnny and Mary,

It has
been reported
, and documented, that excessive noise and disturbance has been coming from your rented premises at 1234 Elm, unit 52, (
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
, giving times/
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
).

It Is
absolutely
essential that all residents respect the right to quite enjoyment of their neighbors, a right that
is protected
by law and by the covenants of your lease.

I ask that you respect the concerns of your neighbors and control the noise levels generated within your rented premises. If you do not do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, you will be in violation of your lease, and with local law,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
more
importantly
, you will be disrupting the quite enjoyment of your neighbors.

Thank you in advance for your cooperation.

Justin
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Dahood
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbour for excessive noise

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
121 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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