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Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company. bjR3
Dear Manager, I request you to grant me a time off of 2 weeks to complete my Masters in Business Administration(Computers) from 01-Apr-2021 to 15-Apr-2021. I will complete all the pending tasks from my end before taking the time off. After returning from the leave i will start the new project which would be helpful to evaluate the employee's performance over all the year. This new project would save the time used to calculate the effort of employee's. The other task i am planning to take up is the Database clean up which is very imp0rtant. The Masters which I am currently pursuing would help me to add value to company's work. I have learned many new technologies in the course would be helpful in developing new tools in house. Thus, saving lot of money and time. I am planning to apply all the techniques which are relevant to our work. Thank you, Yours faithfully, 123
Dear Manager,

I request you to grant me a
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time
off of 2 weeks to complete my Masters in Business Administration(Computers) from 01-Apr-2021 to 15-Apr-2021.

I will complete all the pending tasks from my
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end
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before
taking the
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time
off.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
returning from the
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leave
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
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start
the
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new
project which would be helpful to evaluate the employee's performance over all the year. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
project would save the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to calculate the effort of employee's. The other task
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am planning to take up is the Database clean up which is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
imp0rtant.

The Masters which I am
currently
pursuing would
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help
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
value to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's work. I have learned
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many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
technologies in the course would be helpful in developing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
tools in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
Thus
, saving lot of money and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. I am planning to apply all the techniques which are relevant to our work.

Thank you,

Yours
faithfully
,

123

IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Ask for some time off to complete a qualification. Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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