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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 59EP
GOOD DAY MADAM THE GRAPH ABOVE DEPTICTS THE ANNUAL EXPENDITURE OF US CONSUMERS ON CELL PHONES AND RESIDENTIAL PHONE SERCICES BETWEEN THE YEARS 2001-2010. FIRSTLY ABOUT CELL PHONE SERVICES THE GRAPH SHOWS A STEADY INCREASE FROM 2001 YO 2010. WHICH IMPLIES THAT THERE IS A STEADY INCREASE INTHE USAGE OF CELL PHONE SERVICES BY THE US CONSUMERS THROUGHT THE YEARS. THIS INFORMATION CLEARLY SHOWS THE HUGE POTENTIAL FOR DEVELOPMENT IN THE MOBILE INDUSTRY WHICH WILL CONTINUE TO PROGRESS THROUGH THE YEARS I N THE US ECONOMY SECONDLY ABOUT THE RESEDENTIAL PHONE SERVIVES. THE GRAPH SHOWS A STEADY DECREASE THROUGH THE YEARS 2001 TO 2010. THIS MEANS THAT THERE IS A STEADY DECREASE IN THE ANNUAL EXPENDITURE OF US CONSUMERS ON RESIDENTIAL PHONE SERVICES. WHEN A COMPARISON IS MADE BETWEEN THE CELL PHONE AND RESIDENTIAL PHONE SERVICES IT CLEARLY SHOWS THE RISE OF CELL PHONES AND DOWNFALL OF RESIDENTAL PHONES THE REASON BEING CELL PHONES ARE SMALL, EASY TO USE AND EASY TO CARRY AROUND. THAT BEING SAID I COCLUDE THAT THE GROWING NEED FOR CELL PHONES AMONG US CONSUMERS IS JUST AND A TURN TOWARDS INNOVATION. AFTERALL WHERE WOULD MAN BE NOW IF NOT FOR INNOVATION.
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GOOD
DAY MADAM

THE GRAPH ABOVE
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DEPTICTS
THE ANNUAL EXPENDITURE OF US
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CONSUMERS
ON
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CELL
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PHONES
AND RESIDENTIAL
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PHONE
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SERCICES
BETWEEN THE YEARS 2001-2010.

FIRSTLY
ABOUT
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CELL
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PHONE
SERVICES THE GRAPH
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SHOWS
A
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STEADY
INCREASE
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FROM 2001 YO 2010
. WHICH IMPLIES THAT THERE IS A
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STEADY
INCREASE
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INTHE
USAGE OF
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CELL
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PHONE
SERVICES BY THE US
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CONSUMERS
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THROUGHT
THE YEARS. THIS INFORMATION
CLEARLY
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SHOWS
THE HUGE POTENTIAL FOR DEVELOPMENT IN THE MOBILE INDUSTRY WHICH WILL CONTINUE TO PROGRESS THROUGH THE YEARS I N THE US
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ECONOMY


SECONDLY
ABOUT THE
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RESEDENTIAL
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PHONE
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SERVIVES
. THE GRAPH
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SHOWS
A
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STEADY
DECREASE THROUGH THE YEARS 2001 TO 2010. THIS MEANS THAT THERE IS A
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STEADY
DECREASE IN THE ANNUAL EXPENDITURE OF US
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CONSUMERS
ON RESIDENTIAL
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PHONE
SERVICES.

WHEN A COMPARISON
IS MADE
BETWEEN THE
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CELL
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PHONE
AND RESIDENTIAL
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PHONE
SERVICES IT
CLEARLY
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SHOWS
THE RISE OF
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CELL
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PHONES
AND DOWNFALL OF
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RESIDENTAL
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PHONES
THE REASON BEING
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CELL
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PHONES
ARE
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SMALL
, EASY TO
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USE
AND EASY TO CARRY AROUND.

THAT
BEING SAID
I
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COCLUDE
THAT THE GROWING NEED FOR
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CELL
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PHONES
AMONG US
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CONSUMERS
IS
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JUST
AND A TURN TOWARDS INNOVATION.
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AFTERALL
WHERE WOULD
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MAN
BE
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NOW
IF NOT FOR INNOVATION.
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IELTS letter The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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