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Write a letter your friends to say goodbye

Write a letter your friends to say goodbye LbXp8
Dear D27S, Before saying anything, I just want to tell you that I don't literally want to turn this memory into something sad and cheesy, umm, but that may be the way it is. So brace yourself and I hope all this words from the bottom of my heart may make you tear, even just a little bit. It has been a long time since we first met. I still rememember all those days when I used to regard D27S someones so cool and mature. I don't know, but I'm glad I haven't felt it that way anymore. 'Cause now I get to know all of you better. I feel like we are a family under a roof named FIC. I saw all your enthusiasm for the club, I saw how you all had managed through 4 years of college with a lot of great achivements, I also saw all your missing but it doesn't matter 'cause I accept it all. In the end, no one pefect but I know all of us make each other pefect. I mean, FIC is perfect. So it's time to say good bye. Sometime I just wish time could grind to a halt so we could live in this moment a little bit more but, you know, we all have to keep moving forward. All of you are going to open a new chapter of your life. All the time we have spent, all the deadlines we have crushed, all the late night we have stayed at martial arts hall, all the moment and joy we have shared. I hope you will keep all these memories with you on your new journey. D28S wishes you all the best thing in this world! Love, FIC
Dear D27S,

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brace yourself and I hope all this words from the bottom of my heart may
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you tear, even
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still
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rememember
all those days when I
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to regard D27S someones
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cool and mature. I don't
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,
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all of you better. I feel like we are a family under a roof named FIC. I
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saw
all your enthusiasm for the club, I
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how you all had managed through 4 years of college with
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achivements
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all of us
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could grind to a halt
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moving forward. All of you are going to open a new chapter of your life. All the
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we have spent, all the deadlines we have crushed, all the late night we have stayed at martial
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hall, all the moment and joy we have shared. I hope you will
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all these memories with you on your new journey.

D28S wishes you all the best thing in this world!

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Love
,

FIC
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IELTS letter Write a letter your friends to say goodbye

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7 paragraphs
289 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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