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Writing letter to English speaking friend

Writing letter to English speaking friend AwVW1
Dear Kumanan, Hope you and your family members are fine. I like to inform you that we move to different flat due to fact of my housing tenant agreement ended last month, and we don't like to renew the agreement due to the fact of distance between office and my older place. My new residence is a three-room flat, and it is extremely neat and modern. Since it's located at high floor, Inside the flat airy and brighter. My house owner has extremely good taste in arts, consequently interior looks nice and pleasant. Compare to my older residence this one is more secured for the reason that CCTV camera around the house. Bus stop and MRT are nearer to my flat, it's give convenient options to choose the best one. Wet market and malls are available around the apartment, consequently shopping too easy for us. totally I love this new house. I like to invite you to my new house, Coming Sunday if you have time please join with us with your family.
Dear
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Kumanan
,

Hope you and your family members are fine. I like to inform you that we
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move
to
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different
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flat
due to fact of my housing tenant agreement ended last month, and we don't like to renew the agreement due to the fact of distance between office and my older place.

My new residence is a three-room
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flat
, and it is
extremely
neat and modern. Since it's located at high floor, Inside the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flat
airy and brighter. My
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house
owner has
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
taste in arts,
consequently
interior looks nice and pleasant. Compare to my older residence this one is more secured for the reason that CCTV camera around the
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house
. Bus
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stop
and MRT are nearer to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flat
, it's give convenient options to choose the best one. Wet market and malls are available around the apartment,
consequently
shopping too easy for us.
totally
I
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love
this new
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house
.

I like to invite you to my new
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house
, Coming Sunday if you have time
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
with us with your family.
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IELTS letter Writing letter to English speaking friend

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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