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Write a letter to your manager asking for a training course. Which you would like to attend.

Write a letter to your manager asking for a training course. Which you would like to attend. wmom3
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to request you to allow me to attend a course that is part of my job. I am work as senior Accountant and the course is Computer Hardware I would like to attend this for two month certificate, It will Improve my knowledge in the field. In our company there are many problems related to Hardware has as CD RAM and CPU and sometime it was too late for repair this because of the mechanic in this case, if I have learn the all things, hence it would be beneficial for the company too. Moreover, it improves my internal knowledge towards the company. I would inform you that, when I will attend this course, I would be prefer to work at home and there would not any complain about work due to the course. I will do my work with same efficiency. Employees skills are beneficial for the company in the future and multi-telanted worker would be always found by the organization. It would be reduce the cost of the units. Looking for your favourable response. Yours Sincerely, Namrata Sonani.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to request you to
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allow
me to attend a
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course
that is
part of my job. I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
as senior Accountant and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is Computer Hardware I would like to attend this for two month
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certificate
, It will
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Improve
my knowledge in the field.

In our
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company
there are
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many
problems related to Hardware has as CD RAM and CPU and sometime it was too late for repair this
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because
of the mechanic
in this case
, if I have
Use past participle here: "learned", "learnt".
learn
the all things,
hence
it would be beneficial for the
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company
too.
Moreover
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
my internal knowledge towards the
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company
.

I would inform you that, when I will attend this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
, I would be
Consider using the past participle "preferred"?
prefer
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
at home and there would not any complain about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
due to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I will do my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
with same efficiency.

Employees
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skills
are beneficial for the
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company
in the future and
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multi-telanted
worker
The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'would' and 'be'.
would be always
found by the organization. It would be
Consider using the past participle "reduced"?
reduce
the cost of the units.

Looking for your
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favourable
response.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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Namrata
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Sonani
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager asking for a training course. Which you would like to attend.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
187 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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