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To my closest and best friend, dear Mohammad Establishig a friendship with such a confidant and honest person like you definitely could be considered as a sheer bliss and a divine blessing. I'm obsessed with you most time to be honest. Candidly, I would be really grateful for inviting me to your birthday party, and I'm delighted wholeheartedly for this event. Unfortunately, I want to say that I won't able to participate in this great event. Hope you would forgive me for this matter. To tell you the truth, I must travel to abroad for an occupational mission on scheduled time next week. Although, I wish I could be able to be present on this significant occasion and celebrate together. We could have been created pure and memorable moments beside each other like last year. It's on me to arrange to visit you at a decent opportunity in the near future, due to compensate for this excuse. By the way, I will have been considering buying an amazing gift in overseas for belated birthday feast. In advance, I want to offer my sincere and kind wishes to you; May be indulged with health, wealth, happiness and prosperity. Wish all of your dreams and aspiration into come reality. Life long and prosper. You're faithfully
To my closest and best friend, dear Mohammad

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Establishig
a friendship with such a confidant and honest person like you definitely could
be considered
as a sheer bliss and a divine blessing. I'm obsessed with you most time to be honest.

Candidly
, I would be
really
grateful for inviting me to your birthday party, and I'm delighted
wholeheartedly
for this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. Unfortunately, I want to say that I won't able to participate in this great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
. Hope you would forgive me for this matter.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you the truth, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
travel to abroad for an occupational mission on scheduled time
next
week. Although, I wish I could be able to be present on this significant occasion and celebrate together. We could have
been created
pure and memorable moments beside each other like last year.

It's on me to arrange to visit you at a decent opportunity in the near future, due to compensate for this excuse. By the way, I will have been considering buying an amazing gift in overseas for belated birthday feast.

In advance, I want to offer my sincere and kind wishes to you; May
be indulged
with health, wealth, happiness and prosperity. Wish all of your dreams and aspiration into
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
reality. Life long and prosper.

You're
faithfully
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IELTS letter recline a birthday party informal letter

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  American English
7 paragraphs
212 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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