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Write about your feelings and what you think the organisers should to about this situation

Write about your feelings and what you think the organisers should to about this situation 1mgE7

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with an acutely nuisance that your agency put in. First of all, let me introduce myself. Iam Emma Bell who is a regular client of your travel agency. Together with friends, we reserved three travel vauchers exactly a month ago in case the seats are run out. Although you recommended us luxury hotel with individual rooms, you apprised that we would eventually be given a family room with an en-suite bathroom. It made us extremely furious. The primary problem is your irresponsibility for your devolved work. Despite of the fact that we had already paid in full payment in terms of an individual room, a private-ensuite bathroom, Tv and wi-fi, your agency did not take any further precautionary measures in advance. For these reasons, I must urge you to refund money that we gave payment to the individual grandeur room. And I feel we are also entitled to some compensation for the inconvenience we have suffered.

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with an You used an adverb ('acutely') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('nuisance') instead of another adjective.
acutely nuisance
 that your agency put in.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me introduce myself. Possible spelling mistake found.IAMAmIBMSamRAMDam
Iam
 Emma Bell who is a regular client of your travel agency.

Together with friends, we reserved three travel Possible spelling mistake found.vouchers
vauchers
 exactly a month ago in case the seats are run
 out. Although you recommended us luxury hotel with individual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
, you apprised that we would eventually
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 a family You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with an en-suite bathroom. It made us extremely
 furious.

The primary problem is your irresponsibility for your devolved work. Did you mean "Despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?Despite
Despite of
 the fact that we had already paid in full payment in terms of an individual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, a Possible spelling mistake found.
private-ensuite
 bathroom, Possible spelling mistake found.TVToMTVCTVTTUV
Tv
 and Possible spelling mistake found.Wi-FiWiFiWIFIhi-fi
wi-fi
, your agency did not take any further
 precautionary measures in advance.

For these reasons, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 urge you to refund money that we gave payment to the individual grandeur You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. And I feel we are also
 entitled to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 compensation for the inconvenience we have suffered. 