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Write a letter to your friend, invite her/him to the party.

Write a letter to your friend, invite her/him to the party. KYeQN
Dear Mary, Haw are you? I hope you are well. Many thanks for your recent letter. I am very sorry that I haven't been in touch with you for a long time. As your letter you mentioned about you excellent exam results. It is great news and glad to hear that. I wish good luck in your further studies. I want to infom you about the party which I am going to organise at the weekend. The reason of this party is to celebrate my new job. So it makes me happy if I see you in my party, come and be my guest. I hope, it will be great fun with the different kind of shows as I planned. Of course it gives me pleasure to be with my close friends. I am sure we will enjoy being together. Anyway, I must go and get on with my work. I look forward to seeing with you. All the best, Ann.
Dear Mary,
A comma should precede the tag question (i.e., the yes/no-question at the end).
Haw
are you? I hope you are well.
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Many
thanks for your recent letter. I am
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very
sorry that I haven't been in touch with you for a long time.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
your letter you
Did you mean simply "mentioned you"? You do not need the word "about" here.
mentioned about you
excellent exam results. It is great news and glad to hear that. I wish
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
luck in your
further
studies.

I want to
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infom
you about the party which I am going to
Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.
organise
The phrase 'at the weekend' is a British English expression, which is used the same way as "on the weekend" in American English.
at the weekend
. The reason of this party is to celebrate my new job.
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So
it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me happy if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you in my party,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
and be my guest. I hope, it will be great fun with the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
kind of
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shows
as I planned. Of
The comma is probably missing here: "course, it".
course it
gives me pleasure to be with my close friends. I am sure we will enjoy being together. Anyway, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
go and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
on with my work. I look forward to seeing with you. All the best, Ann.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend, invite her/him to the party.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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