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Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged.

Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. pwd2
Respected Sir or Madam, I am Mariah Olsen living at the Block 2 house number 4 of St. Patrick's society and I am writing hereby to address a problem about damaged road in front my house has damaged. Two days back before midnight, a humongous lorry filled with construction site material passed through the area and inadvertently had an accident on the steep turn near the sign. Although, the incident was not major, it has caused material to come out from the either sides of road. Since then, the deterioration has continued, resulting into immensely damaged section of the road. I think that asphalt fillers should be immediately used for restoring the damage caused. This can be down during dusk time as many passengers, otherwise, will have trouble commuting, because it is the only way towards downtown. The job should be finished in a span of couple hours and material should be left for cool down. I hope you look into the matter as soon as possible and also action the suggestions I mentioned. Yours Sincerely, Mariah Olsen
Respected Sir or Madam, I am Mariah Olsen living at the Block 2
house
number 4 of St. Patrick's
society and
I am writing hereby to address a problem about damaged road in front my
house
has damaged.

Two days back
before
midnight, a humongous lorry filled with construction site material passed through the area and
inadvertently
had an accident on the steep turn near the
sign
. Although, the incident was not major, it has caused material to
come
out from the either sides of road. Since then, the deterioration has continued, resulting into
immensely
damaged section of the road.

I
think
that asphalt fillers should be immediately
used
for restoring the damage caused. This can be down during dusk time as
many
passengers,
otherwise
, will have trouble commuting,
because
it is the
only
way towards downtown. The job should
be finished
in a span of couple hours and material should be
left
for cool down.

I hope you look into the matter as
soon
as possible and
also
action the suggestions I mentioned.

Yours
Sincerely
, Mariah Olsen
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
177 words
6.5
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