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Write a letter to your landlord regarding a water problem. Explain the problem. How are you affected by this? What do you want the landlord to do?

Write a letter to your landlord regarding a water problem. Explain the problem. How are you affected by this? What do you want the landlord to do? PVaOj

Dear Ms Begg, I am writing to inform you that the main water pipe burst on 1 May 2018 in the apartment I rented and I require you to take immediate action to remedy the situation. On 1 May 2018 at 10. 00 a. m. , I noticed a large seepage of water on the kitchen floor, and traced the source to a spot on the kitchen wall. I immediately called the building superintendent for his assistance. The building superintendent’s investigation revealed that the main water pipe running through the apartment had burst, and he turned off the water mains to ensure the situation did not become more dire. Unfortunately, that meant that I have had no access to water in my apartment since. In addition, when the leak happened, the water spread onto some books that I had kept in the kitchen, and completely ruined them as the pages are now stuck together. I would appreciate if you could send a plumber over immediately to repair the main pipe, at your cost. Please inform me in writing by tomorrow when your plumber will be able to attend to the matter. In addition, I would also like you to replace the books that have been damaged by the leak. I have enclosed a list of the titles with this letter, as well as pictures of the damaged books for your perusal. Please feel free to contact me on my mobile phone if you need further information or need to discuss the situation. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Christine Gee

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 pipe burst on 1 May 2018 in the apartment I rented and I require you to take immediate action to remedy the situation.

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water
 on the kitchen floor, and traced the source to a spot on the kitchen wall. I immediately called the building superintendent for his assistance. The building superintendent’s investigation revealed that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
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water
 pipe running through the apartment had burst, and he turned off the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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mains
 to ensure the situation did not become more dire. Unfortunately, that meant that I have had no access to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in my apartment since. In addition
, when the leak happened, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 spread onto This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 books that I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in the kitchen, and completely ruined them as the pages are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 stuck together.

I would appreciate if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a plumber over immediately to repair the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprimemajorcentralpreeminentleadingprimary
main
 pipe, at your cost. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 inform me in writing by tomorrow when your plumber will be able to attend to the matter. In addition
, I would also
 like you to replace the books that have been damaged
 by the leak. I have enclosed a list of the titles with this letter, as well
 as pictures of the damaged books for your perusal.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 feel free to contact me on my mobile phone if you need further
 information or need to discuss the situation. Thank you.

Yours sincerely
,

Christine Gee