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Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: where you live what the problem is what he should do

Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: where you live what the problem is what he should do r7Lp
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to complain about the nuisance created in one of the wings of our building. I am one of your tenants who live in C block and my flat number is A12. For the last few days, I have been facing problem to concentrate on my studies because of the noise created by the neighbours. Every evening, they play loud music and many people visit their house the whole day and create hustle bustle in the corridor. I also requested them twice to lower down the music volume but they ignored. I clearly mentioned you before shifting to the apartment, it was my only condition that I need a place with a quiet ambience. This is because, I am preparing for my competitive exam. Therefore, it is my humble request to have a word with them and resolve the issue. Hoping for a positive response from you. Yours faithfully, Kiran
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about the nuisance created in one of the wings of our building. I am one of your tenants who
live
in C block and my flat number is A12.

For the last few days, I have been facing problem to concentrate on my studies
because
of the noise created by the
neighbours
. Every evening, they play loud music and
many
people
visit their
house
the whole day and create hustle bustle in the corridor. I
also
requested them twice to lower down the music volume
but
they
ignored
.

I
clearly
mentioned you
before
shifting to the apartment, it was my
only
condition that I need a place with a quiet ambience. This is
because
, I am preparing for my competitive exam.
Therefore
, it is my humble request to have a word with them and resolve the issue.

Hoping for a
positive
response from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kiran
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. Include: where you live what the problem is what he should do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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