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Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him/her to a party. In the letter, you should: – When, where, timing – Give some details about the plan of the party – Tell him/her what you are doing recently.

Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him/her to a party. In the letter, you should: – When, where, timing – Give some details about the plan of the party – Tell him/her what you are doing recently. RJkp
Dear Rama, I am delighted to tell you that I am throwing a birthday party at my residence. This birthday is very special to me as I am turning eighteen this year. The celebration is on the 15th of April in a park which is a few meters away from my accommodation. We are hoping to start the party at 6: 00 P. M sharp, so that we would be able to wrap it up by 10 O' clock. Moreover, it is a theme party and has been decided that everyone has to look and act as one of the characters of a fairytale princess. Please let me know once you decide which character you wish to play. I will arrange your costumes as per the requirement. I have applied for my higher education in the Punjab Agricultural University for my higher studies. Hopefully, I would get the opportunity to study there. Eagerly waiting to see you soon. Regards to your family. Yours truly, kiran
Dear Rama,

I
am delighted
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that I am throwing a birthday party at my residence. This birthday is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
special to me as I am turning eighteen this year. The celebration is on the 15th of April in a park which is a few meters away from my accommodation. We are hoping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the party at 6: 00 P. M sharp,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that we would be able to wrap it up by 10 O' clock.

Moreover
, it is a theme party and has
been decided
that everyone
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has to
look and act as one of the characters of a
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fairytale
princess.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know once you decide which character you wish to play. I will arrange your costumes as per the requirement.

I have applied for my higher education in the Punjab Agricultural University for my higher studies.
Hopefully
, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the opportunity to study there.

Eagerly
waiting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
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soon
. Regards to your family.

Yours
truly
,

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kiran

IELTS letter Write a letter to one of your classmates and invite him/her to a party. In the letter, you should: – When, where, timing – Give some details about the plan of the party – Tell him/her what you are doing recently.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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