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write a letter to your landlord company about noise in the block or flats which he owns

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Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing this letter in the hope that you can help me with a problem regarding a loud noise in my apartment during late hours. I hope you consider this situation favorably. I am a resident of Tokyo residence on Bell Road and our unit is number four on the seventh floor. I have just moved into this new condo last Wednesday with one year lease agreement. Let me explain my situation in more detail. On my first day, the manager at your company have verified that we would not hear our neighbors unless they are making loud banging noises. Unfortunately, I am able to hear just normal daily conversations from next door. For instance, someone was playing a piano for many hours yesterday and I could hear it as she was playing sitting next to me. Therefore, I am unable to concentrate on my studies as I am taking online classes due to coronavirus lockdown. I would like to ask you to resolve this matter as soon as possible as you are the representative of the company. Finally, I need you to install sound proof materials at least on the wall so that I could study during daytime and sleep properly at night. I look forward hearing from you. Yours sincerely, John

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