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Application letter, about working shop at the City Museum

Application letter, about working shop at the City Museum 6xRLr

To Museum director. Dear Sir. Warm greetings. I am going to write about an advertisement which l read two days ago from English newspaper. About myself l would like to say, l am a student taking up a degree tutorial in an esteemed institution. I have an excellent experience and l am an active a number of competitions at the University. According to invitation work at the moment am at home because of my vocation. I have also skill to this job because my mother had served as an sales assistant at the Museum shop more years. she always brought me with herself when I was free. I am sure l can do this job perfectly, as my mother. I know how to communicate with people fastly and I can do this work without difficulty. I hope you will hear me as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you.

To Museum director. Dear Sir. Warm greetings. I am going to write about an advertisement which l read two days ago from English newspaper. About myself l would like to say, l am a student taking up a degree tutorial in an esteemed institution. I have an excellent experience and l am an active a number of competitions at the University. According to invitation work at the moment am at home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of my vocation. I have also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 to this job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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 sales assistant at the Museum shop more years. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
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 always brought me with herself when I was free. I am sure l can do this job perfectly
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people
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 and I can do this work without difficulty. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you will hear me as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you. 