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Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain • Why you are writing to them • Why you think the insurance should not be increased • What you want them to do

Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain • Why you are writing to them • Why you think the insurance should not be increased • What you want them to do R5j5Q
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your recent elevation of my car insurance fee. My insurance account number is 12345 and my name is Jackson White. As I have never claimed any insurance fee from your company over the last decades, it reflects my good driving attitude in my past and low potential of insurance claim tendency in the future. Therefore, I believe it is not fair to raise my monthly insurance fee. At last, I request your company retain my monthly car insurance fee as the original price, if not I would take action to withdraw my car insurance from your company. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jackson White
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your recent elevation of my car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
fee. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
account number is 12345 and my name is Jackson White.

As I have never claimed any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
fee from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
over the last decades, it reflects my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
driving attitude in my past and low potential of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
claim tendency in the future.
Therefore
, I believe it is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
to raise my monthly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
fee.

At last, I request your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
retain my monthly car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
fee as the original price, if not I would take action to withdraw my car
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
insurance
from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jackson White
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain • Why you are writing to them • Why you think the insurance should not be increased • What you want them to do

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  American English
6 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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