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write a letter to the executive to move to another class

write a letter to the executive to move to another class e3y8p

Dear Ms. Jessica, I am Le Nguyen Anh Thu (Hazel) from class 11. 3. I am writing this mail for you because I would like to change more Core class. Now I am in 11D and I would like to change to 11E for some reasons below: 1. I think that the teaching method is not suitable for me and it is also not efficient for me sometimes. 2. In my point of view, the lessons are a little easy for me. Last year, I already completed the English proficiency test and I think that my score was quite high, consequently, I hope I can move into the right class for my English level. 3. Our Core teacher sometimes struggled with online teaching and it also took a lot of our class time. I hope that I can move to another class soon or our Core teacher will adjust the teaching method more efficiently. Thank you for your time and consideration.

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