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Write a letter to your instructor at the local sports centre and say that you are unable to continue training classes. Include the following information in your letter: – Which class were you in? – Why can’t you continue? – What did you like about the classes there?

Write a letter to your instructor at the local sports centre and say that you are unable to continue training classes. Include the following information in your letter: – Which class were you in? – Why can’t you continue? – What did you like about the classes there? BWA7w
Dear Sid, I am writing to express my concern about my inability to continue the training classes. I joined the training center on the 3rd of this month and have been coming regularly in the morning batch from 8 to 10. My company has decided to transfer me to Canada for a three-month where I will be representing the application we developed. It requires me to immediately shift my base and move there. Leaving this lifetime opportunity is not something I would prefer to do and it makes coming for training not feasible. Though it is a short span, I really enjoyed my time being there, and the environment you provide for exercising is truly phenomenal. I have never been mentally tired of working out no matter how much the body was emaciated. I have already paid the fee for three months because I thought I would be here. It would be very kind of you if you could return my remaining balance. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks & Regards Keerthi
Dear Sid,

I am writing to express my concern about my inability to continue the training classes. I
joined
the training center on the 3rd of this month and have been coming
regularly
in the morning batch from 8 to 10.

My
company
has decided to transfer me to Canada for a three-month where I will be representing the application we developed. It requires me to immediately shift my base and
move
there. Leaving this lifetime opportunity is not something I would prefer to do and it
makes
coming for training not feasible.

Though it is a short span, I
really
enjoyed my time being there, and the environment you provide for exercising is
truly
phenomenal. I have never been mentally tired of working out no matter how much the body
was emaciated
.

I have already paid the fee for three months
because
I
thought
I would be here. It would be
very
kind of you if you could return my remaining balance.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks & Regards

Keerthi
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your instructor at the local sports centre and say that you are unable to continue training classes. Include the following information in your letter: – Which class were you in? – Why can’t you continue? – What did you like about the classes there?

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6.5
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