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Write a mail to your manager, providing him/her the requested information. Provide reasons and examples to support your points

Write a mail to your manager, providing him/her the requested information. Provide reasons and examples to support your points PXJ5p
Hi (Manager’s Name), This is with regard to the training and development program we discussed earlier; I would like to attend myself for the following three training programs. 1. US GAAP - Delivery by specialist accounting trainers 2. Oracle latest version 12. 2 – General Ledger applications 3. Leadership Development & Company Culture Training The first two can be helpful to enhance my ongoing career in professional life and the third one will be helpful to improve my skills in managing the people in professional life and personal life as well. Request you to nominate my name for the above training programs and I will make sure that our day to day deliverables will not affect due to this. Also, I wish to attend your choice of training program if you could suggest one. Thank you. Regards Freddie (Company Name) Finance Analyst > Accounting Scenario #2: You and your man
Hi (Manager’s Name),

This is with regard to the
training
and development
program
we discussed earlier; I would like to attend myself for the following three
training
programs. 1
. US
GAAP
-
Delivery by specialist accounting
trainers


2. Oracle
latest
version 12. 2
General Ledger applications

3. Leadership Development &
Company
Culture
Training


The
first
two can be helpful to enhance my ongoing career in professional life and the third one will be helpful to
improve
my
skills
in managing the
people
in professional life and personal life
as well
.

Request you to nominate my name for the above
training
programs
and I will
make
sure that our
day to day
deliverables will not affect due to this.

Also
, I wish to attend your choice of
training
program
if you could suggest one.

Thank you.

Regards

Freddie

(
Company
Name)

Finance Analyst > Accounting

Scenario #2: You and your
man
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IELTS letter Write a mail to your manager, providing him/her the requested information. Provide reasons and examples to support your points

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149 words
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