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what damage does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by governmet and individuals to solve this problem?

what damage does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by governmet and individuals to solve this problem? Lq7Mp
Nowadays, our environment is being damaged and is suffering because plastic pollution. Plastics bags, plastic waste contributes has been thrown for year without any treatment. Both, individuals and government should coordinate efforts to solve this problem in order avoid the Earth destruction in a near future. Today our environment is suffering due to the fact that the increasing quantity of plastic waste that are thrown to the land and seas. Every little piece of plastic that come from bottles are poisoning and threatening sea life. Whales and fishes cannot distinguish between food and plastic; hence, they eat plastics bolls and then they get intoxicate and died with this plastic. Because plastic waste is thrown to the land and then burned, the air is impossible to breath and the land is prevented to be seed. What is more, recently, an artificial plastic island has been detected in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, increasing it contamination and killing a lot of turtles because they ate plastic bags instead of jellyfish. Something should be done. Although our planet is dying, we have some hope that both Government and people could help to solve this hugh environmental problem. First of all, the government must punish big companies when they are contaminating our land and sea. Also there should be a legislation protecting our environment. Secondly, people education will contribute to make the awareness of taking care about our plant and teach to the individuals to throw waste into streets, land and sea. In conclusion, Although our planet is suffering because plastic pollution, both government and individual can collaborate to avoid damaging the environment and recycling plastics.
Nowadays, our
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environment
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being damaged
and is suffering
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because
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plastic
pollution.
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Plastics
bags,
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plastic
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waste
contributes has
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for year without any treatment. Both, individuals and
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government
should coordinate efforts to solve this problem in order avoid the Earth destruction in a near future.

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Today
our
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environment
is suffering due to the fact that the increasing quantity of
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plastic
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waste
that
are thrown
to the
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land
and seas. Every
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little
piece of
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plastic
that
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come
from bottles are poisoning and threatening sea life. Whales and fishes cannot distinguish between food and
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plastic
;
hence
, they eat
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plastics
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bolls and
then they
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intoxicate and
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died
with this
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plastic
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Because
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plastic
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waste
is thrown
to the
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land
and then burned, the air is impossible to breath and the
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land
is
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prevented
to
be seed
.
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, recently, an artificial
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plastic
island has
been detected
in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, increasing it contamination and killing
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a lot of
turtles
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because
they ate
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plastic
bags
instead
of jellyfish.

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be done
. Although our planet is dying, we have
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hope that both
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and
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environmental problem.
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big
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companies
when they are contaminating our
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land
and sea.
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Also
there should be a legislation protecting our
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environment
.
Secondly
,
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people
education will contribute to
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make
the awareness of taking care about our plant and teach to the individuals to throw
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waste
into streets,
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land
and sea.

In conclusion
, Although our planet is suffering
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because
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plastic
pollution, both
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government
and individual can collaborate to avoid damaging the
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environment
and recycling
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plastics
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IELTS letter what damage does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by governmet and individuals to solve this problem?

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