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write a letter to mrs barrett

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Dear Mrs Barret, I am writing to express my interest in your linked-in position, that has been published requesting someone to help you this summer in your house. I would like to let you know that I am the best candidate to help you cooking and doing your chores in your house from January to February. I have been learning how to cook healthy food, therefore I believe that I would be helpful cooking for you. I am really interested in sharing the whole summer with an english native person. It could help me to improve both writing and speaking english skills. I would be delighted to apply my healthy food recipes in you kitchen. I would like to inform you, that I will be available from Monday to Friday. Although I am available during the week, I am not be available Saturdays and Sundays. What is more, during the weekends I am planning to travel to another city. Thanks for your consideration in my application and I look forward for your answer.
Dear Mrs
Barret
,

I am writing to express my interest in your linked-in position, that has
been published
requesting someone to
help
you this summer in your
house
.

I would like to
let
you know that I am the best candidate to
help
you
cooking
and doing your chores in your
house
from January to February.
I
have been learning how to cook healthy food,
therefore
I believe that I would be helpful cooking for you.

I
am
really
interested in sharing the whole summer with an
english
native person. It could
help
me to
improve
both writing and speaking
english
skills
. I would
be delighted
to apply my healthy food recipes in you kitchen.

I would like to inform you, that I will be available from Monday to Friday. Although I am available during the week, I am not
be
available Saturdays and Sundays.
What is more
, during the weekends I am planning to travel to another city.

Thanks for your consideration in my application and I look forward for your answer.
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IELTS letter write a letter to mrs barrett

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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