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Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your apartment while you are gone. Tell hi m where the keys are. Tell him to take care of one thing while you are away. Tell him what to do on the way of your arrival.

Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your apartment while you are gone. Tell hi m where the keys are. Tell him to take care of one thing while you are away. Tell him what to do on the way of your arrival. QlMV9
Dear Sati, Hi, hope you doing great. I am writing this letter to inform that you can still use my home in the my absence. Firstly, you will find house keys from my neighbourhood having house number 404B. You should collect keys from theme in evening after 5pm. I also share contact number of theme for your better communication which is 942985693. Secondly, electric supply is off. Hence, I request you that please turn on main electric switch. You can find it next right to main entrance door of home. You can also run power generator if any power cut and its switch in main hall on right pillar. Lastly, . I might be reach at home n 27th march by 8: 30 pm and I will be starving after having such arduous journey. As you know that I prefer any vegetarian cuisine. I will be on cloud nine if I have your handmade hotchpotch moreover; all ingredients are available in kitchen. Please Feel homely and eagerly to wait to meet you. Yours lovingly, Anushree
Dear
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Sati
,

Hi, hope
Did you mean "you're doing", "you are doing", or "you were doing"?
you doing
great. I am writing this letter to inform that you can
still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
my home in
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "my absence" or "the absence"?
the my absence
.

Firstly
, you will find
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
keys from my
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.
neighbourhood
having
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
number 404B. You should collect keys from theme in evening after 5pm. I
also
share contact number of theme for your better communication which is 942985693.

Secondly
, electric supply is off.
Hence
, I request you that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
turn on main electric switch. You can find it
next
right to main entrance door of home. You can
also
run power generator if any power
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
and its switch in main hall on right pillar.

Lastly
Did you just mean "," or "."?
, .
I might be reach at home n 27th march by 8: 30 pm and I will be starving after having such arduous journey.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know that I prefer any vegetarian cuisine. I will be on cloud nine if I have your handmade
Possible spelling mistake found.
hotchpotch
moreover
; all ingredients are available in kitchen.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
Feel homely and
eagerly
to wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.

Yours
lovingly
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Anushree
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who is visiting your apartment while you are gone. Tell hi m where the keys are. Tell him to take care of one thing while you are away. Tell him what to do on the way of your arrival.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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