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hello my name is Zeyad Ehab abed. I am a fresh graduate from the faculty of pharmacy, credit hour system, Horus university in Egypt (HUE) with a total GBA = high very good with a degree of honor (3. 69 of 4). From 2016 to 2019 I participate in GTARCADE company(a multinational company making games on google play and Appstore) As a translator, secretary, and moderator (translating English content and adjust it according to Arabic culture, recording minutes of meetings with other moderators and suggesting events names, forms, and when to publish this event to achieve good sales within games ) Also, in 2019 In Horus university making a campaign in the university field and raising awareness about pancreatic diseases. In 2020, due to the pandemic, I tried to make activities online and it worked. I participated in (YLP-6) Youth leadership program supported by UNDP (united nation development program). I with a team from all over the delta region collaborating and discussing ideas for businesses and entrepreneurs.
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hello
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Zeyad
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abed. I am a fresh graduate from the faculty of pharmacy, credit hour system, Horus university in Egypt (HUE) with a total GBA = high
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with a degree of honor (3. 69 of 4).

From 2016 to 2019 I participate in
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GTARCADE
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(a multinational
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making games on google play and
If you mean the Apple digital distribution platform, use "App Store". For Amazon, use "Amazon Appstore".
Appstore
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As a translator, secretary, and moderator (translating English content and adjust it according to Arabic culture, recording minutes of meetings with other moderators and suggesting
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events
names, forms, and when to publish this
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to achieve
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good
sales within games
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, in 2019 In Horus university making a campaign in the university field and raising awareness about pancreatic diseases.

In 2020, due to the pandemic, I tried to
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make
activities online and it worked. I participated in (YLP-6) Youth leadership program supported by
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UNDP
(united nation development program). I with a team from all over the delta region collaborating and discussing
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ideas
for businesses and entrepreneurs.
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IELTS letter my academic background with other activties

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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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