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Write a letter to your friend who is inviting you to go his country for the next holiday. You are too busy to accept the offer.

Write a letter to your friend who is inviting you to go his country for the next holiday. You are too busy to accept the offer. 7Jbd5
Dear Jay I am writing this with regard to the invitation letter you mailed me last week. Thank you so much for your kind invitation for the holidays to Tokyo, but unfortunately I can't come for the upcoming holiday. Let me explain my situation. First and foremost, I got an offer from the eminent University of London, so I have to arrange the remaining documents for the completion of the admission process in the next two weeks. For instance, the visa process and the English language test. Additionally, I am currently working part-time in a company as a research analyst which will not provide leaves even on holidays. Would you kindly arrange the same at the end of this year? We can go to Bath city for the next-to-next holidays. Hope to hear from you soon. Your friend Love
Dear Jay

I am writing this with regard to the invitation letter you mailed me last week. Thank you
so
much for your kind invitation for the holidays to Tokyo,
but
unfortunately I can't
come
for the upcoming holiday.

Let
me
explain
my situation.
First
and foremost, I
got
an offer from the eminent University of London,
so
I
have to
arrange the remaining documents for the completion of the admission process in the
next
two weeks.
For instance
, the visa process and the English language
test
.
Additionally
, I am
currently
working part-time in a
company
as a research analyst which will not provide
leaves
even on holidays.

Would you kindly arrange the same at the
end
of this year? We can go
to Bath
city for the
next
-to-
next
holidays.

Hope to hear from you
soon
.

Your friend

Love
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend who is inviting you to go his country for the next holiday. You are too busy to accept the offer.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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