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Write a letter to recommend all employee of your company. In your letter • write about his/her employment status • write about his/her responsibilities and any particular skills he/she had.l.

Write a letter to recommend all employee of your company. In your letter • write about his/her employment status • write about his/her responsibilities and any particular skills he/she had. l. Bleap
Dear Sir We hereby testify that Miss Marie Obregon has been employed in our export department for three years. Miss Obregon joined our staff as a junior secretary on March 1, 19, 2010. It has continuously been her aim to improve her professional ability. She took evening courses in secretarial practice and English and a year ago became private secretary to our export manager, frequently handling Spanish and English correspondence independently. She was responsible for arranging sales promotion meetings, and 'preparing reports and minutes. Miss Obregon was willing and able to take on increased responsibility where necessary, often acting as an interpreter in our connections with English-speaking people. She has excellent verbal communication skills and her professional qualifications have been of great benefit to our company. She is giving up her position to get married in May. In taking leave of Miss Obregon, our company gratefully recognises the help given and offers a wholehearted recommendation. (153 words) Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir

We hereby testify that Miss Marie
Obregon
has
been employed
in our export department for three years. Miss
Obregon
joined
our staff as a junior secretary on March 1, 19, 2010. It has
continuously
been her aim to
improve
her professional ability. She took evening courses in secretarial practice and English and a year ago became private secretary to our export manager,
frequently
handling Spanish and English correspondence
independently
. She was responsible for arranging sales promotion meetings, and 'preparing reports and minutes.

Miss
Obregon
was willing and able to take on increased responsibility where necessary,
often
acting as an interpreter in our connections with English-speaking
people
. She has excellent verbal communication
skills
and her professional qualifications have been of great benefit to our
company
.

She is giving up her position to
get
married in May. In taking
leave
of Miss
Obregon
, our
company
gratefully
recognises
the
help
given
and offers a wholehearted recommendation. (153 words)

Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to recommend all employee of your company. In your letter • write about his/her employment status • write about his/her responsibilities and any particular skills he/she had. l.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
159 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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