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The Letter of application for a job

The Letter of application for a job leEWX
Dear sirI am writing to apply for a job of a teacher at your school which l saw advertised in the Telegram channel. I am twenty-eight years old and obtained a degree in english language in Kokand Pedagogical Institute in 2015. I feel, I have many of important qualification needed for this job. I am presently working as an English teacher in the school of number 11 where I have been for two years. In addition to this I partispate in computer course and Ielts degree with 6, 5 score. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. I enjoy several outdoors activities such as planting flowes and swimming. I am sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. If you woul like me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your company. I am looking forward to hearing froom you soon. Your faithfully Norah.
Dear
sirI
am
writing to apply for a job of a teacher at your school which l
saw
advertised in the Telegram channel. I am twenty-eight years
old
and obtained a degree in
english
language in
Kokand
Pedagogical Institute in 2015. I feel, I have
many
of
important
qualification needed for this job.
I
am
presently
working as an English teacher in the school of number 11 where I have been for two years.
In addition
to this I
partispate
in computer course and
Ielts
degree with 6, 5 score. I am proactive and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
I am
currently
looking for a position that will
allow
me to develop my
skills
and experience. I enjoy several outdoors activities such as planting
flowes
and swimming.
I
am sociable and I can
get
on well with new
people
easily
. If you
woul
like me to attend an interview, I would be able to
come
at any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your
company
. I am looking forward to hearing
froom
you
soon
. Your
faithfully
Norah.
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IELTS letter The Letter of application for a job

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
185 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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