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Write a letter to Your friend wants to send his child to learn music. He asked you for some information about the music academy

Write a letter to Your friend wants to send his child to learn music. He asked you for some information about the music academy e8l3W
I hope you are in you redianthalk med god spirituadal also doeshope you are doing great Fortunately, I founda music teacher for your Son Akbar i shocked with joy when I came to know thatyour son Akbos wants to continue his passion of music and i know him since childhood he also likes music and in his child and he also sings immensely beautifull at that time i recognised his talent and to also give you suggestion that you should let him continue his passion and i am extremely happy due to the fact of you give him permission of study music. Luckily, I found the immensely best teacher for your son. In particular, this teacher has years experience in this field of music he can give classes ofpiano, guitar, sitar and also different kind of musical intruments. And due to the fact he was my close friend aswell i personally request him to take proper responsibility of your son. I hope he takes extremely best take care of your son and also your son's passion. Your child is also studying high school so morning music classes will not suites on your son Consequently, I talk to the teacher and he agrees to give evening classes to your son. And also he can polish your sons skill in greater extent. I attach the number and the address of the music teacherand all the best to your son for his future endeavoursYour's faithfully,
I hope you are in you
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med god
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spirituadal
also
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doeshope
you are doing great
Fortunately
, I
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founda
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music
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teacher
for your
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Son
Akbar
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i
shocked with joy when I came to know
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thatyour
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son
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Akbos
wants to continue his passion of
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music
and
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i
know him since childhood he
also
likes
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music
and in his
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child and
he
also
sings
immensely
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beautifull at
that time
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i
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recognised
his talent and to
also
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give
you suggestion that you should
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let
him continue his passion and
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i
am
extremely
happy due to the fact of you
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give
him permission of study
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music
. Luckily, I found the
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immensely best
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teacher
for your
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son
.
In particular
, this
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teacher
has years experience in this field of
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music
he can
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give
classes
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ofpiano
, guitar, sitar and
also
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different
kind of musical
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intruments
. And due to the fact he was my close friend
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aswell
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i
personally
request him to take proper responsibility of your
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son
. I hope he takes
extremely
best take care of your
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son
and
also
your son's passion. Your child is
also
studying high school
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so
morning
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music
classes will not suites on your
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son
Consequently
, I talk to the
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teacher and
he
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agrees
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give
evening classes to your
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son
. And
also
he can polish your
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sons
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skill
in greater extent. I attach the number and the address of the
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music
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teacherand
all the best to your
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son
for his future
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endeavoursYour
's
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to Your friend wants to send his child to learn music. He asked you for some information about the music academy

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  American English
1 paragraphs
242 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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