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Write a letter to your friend to invite her to spend time together on your holiday

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Dear Ann, How are you? I am fine here and hope same for you. As you know that our vacation has started. I have written this letter to invite you to our summer break together at my place. You know I have informed that my summer holidays begin from July 5th. I would like you to spend a month of your holidays with me here. There are a lot of important places, ancient buildings and sightseeing in my hometown. I will introduce you to all my friends and close relatives. I hope you will be able to come. We would have fun and will also create some lovely moments together. Please inform the date and time of you arrival. I will receive you at the station. Give my wishes to your parents. Your loving friend, Jane
Dear Ann, How are you? I am fine here and hope same for you.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know that our vacation has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
. I have written this letter to invite you to our summer break together at my place. You know I have informed that my summer holidays
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
from July 5th. I would like you to spend a month of your holidays with me here. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
places, ancient buildings and sightseeing in my hometown. I will introduce you to all my friends and close relatives. I hope you will be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
. We would have fun and will
also
create
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some
lovely moments together.
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Please
inform the date and time of you arrival. I will receive you at the station. Give my wishes to your parents. Your loving friend,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Jane
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to invite her to spend time together on your holiday

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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