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Watching movies with classmates

Watching movies with classmates 3xJel
Hi Julia! I am so excited to inform you what movie can we watch together this weekend. I think we should watching the "Roh" film because it is the best horror movie. As you know, many of our classmates love to watching horror movies. I advise you not to worry about the transport because I have already asked them about transport and most of them their parents who will send them. Some of us will go with a grab. Moreover, the cinema is very close with our houses. Ofcourse we have to buy a snacks such as popcorns, candies and others. We must prepare enough money to buy it. In addition, the prices include tickets and drinks. Looking forward to spending a whale of time this weekend over a movie!
Hi Julia! I am
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. As you know,
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of our classmates
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. I advise you not to worry about the transport
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them.
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of us will
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go with
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popcorns
, candies
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prepare
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money to
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, the prices include tickets and drinks. Looking forward to spending a whale of time this weekend over a
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IELTS letter Watching movies with classmates

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  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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