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You have recently bought an item from a shop .Write a letter to a friend describing it.

You have recently bought an item from a shop. Write a letter to a friend describing it. RyDBo
Dear Suzan. I am this letter for you about an item which i bought last week. You know, I am eager to purchase some at the weekends. In my opinion, shopping can be favourite activity all women. To start with, On 15th september monday we went the market with my daughter. We were going to buy earring for my honey girl. Do thus, we visited golden shop and i look through some earrings for her. At that time, i had not enough money for golden items because their cost was very expensive. After that, i and my daughter decided to buy silver jewelary. We searched beautiful earring among a lot of jewelaries and finally we found it. IF i described you it, it was oval with a platinum eyes and there were tiny florals around it. Golden water ran over it. It size was a bit small but it was breathtaking. Thus, we bought that item for my daughter and i give you advise to purchase such kind of earrings.
Dear
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Suzan
. I am this letter for you about an item which
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i
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bought
last week. You know, I am eager to
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purchase
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some
at the weekends. In my opinion, shopping can be
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favourite
activity all women. To
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start
with, On 15th
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september
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monday
we went the market with my daughter. We were going to
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buy
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earring
for my honey girl. Do
thus
, we visited golden shop and
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i
look through
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some
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earrings
for her. At that time,
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i
had not
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enough
money for golden items
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because
their cost was
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very
expensive. After that, i and my daughter decided to
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buy
silver
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jewelary
. We searched
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beautiful
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earring
among
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a lot of
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jewelaries
and
finally
we found it. IF
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i
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described
you it, it was oval with a platinum eyes and there were tiny florals around it. Golden water ran over it.
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It
size was a bit
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small
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but
it was breathtaking.
Thus
, we
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bought
that item for my daughter and
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i
give you
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advise
to
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purchase
such kind of
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earrings
.
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IELTS letter You have recently bought an item from a shop. Write a letter to a friend describing it.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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