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Dear Arjit, I am Adil, I recently attended your concert at Palladium on 4th of July.

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Dear Arjit, I am Adil, I recently attended your concert at Palladium on 4th of July. Although there were many artists performing that night, your performance stands out of all. The way you play guitar and your voice is so synchronized that it creates a different aura. I believe you are one of the finest musicians and singers in our country. I have also watched all your musical albums online and can see that you have enormous likes on your videos. I play guitar in my free time; I can listen to music and gage nodes and chord used in any tune. However, I am unable to get a hold of one played in Palladium. You are an inspiration to all young musicians. It would be a great help if you can share the nodes and chord details of your music. I believe you have inaugurated your YouTube channel, young musicians like me are eagerly waiting for few tips, which can help us to learn and improve our knowledge and experience. I would be eagerly waiting for your response. Yours Sincerely, Adil Lakhani
Dear
Arjit
,

I am
Adil
, I recently attended your concert at Palladium on 4th of July. Although there were
many
artists performing that night, your performance stands out of all. The way you play guitar and your voice is
so
synchronized that it creates a
different
aura. I believe you are one of the finest musicians and singers in our country.

I have
also
watched
all your musical albums online and can
see
that you have enormous likes on your videos.
I
play guitar in my free time; I can listen to music and
gage
nodes and chord
used
in any tune.
However
, I am unable to
get
a hold of one played in Palladium.

You are an inspiration to all young musicians. It would be a great
help
if you can share the nodes and chord
details
of your music. I believe you have inaugurated your YouTube channel, young musicians like me are
eagerly
waiting for few tips, which can
help
us to learn and
improve
our knowledge and experience.

I would be
eagerly
waiting for your response.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Adil
Lakhani
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IELTS letter Dear Arjit, I am Adil, I recently attended your concert at Palladium on 4th of July.

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6.0
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