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Customer Suggestion to Bookstore owner

Customer Suggestion to Bookstore owner 6dq30
Dear sir, I hereby express my opinion about the bookstore. What strikes me the most when entering the bookstore is the atmosphere, the decor, tones, lights and relaxing music, which make the environment extremely cozy. Another positive point is the vast choice of books on different topics, for all types of audiences. Undoubtedly, the freedom to analyze a work with all the comfort of the sofas available in the reading area is a factor that adds positively. To complete, the installation of the cafeteria with several types of coffees and snacks makes customers have a great experience. I don't really like the layout of how the books are located, in addition to the themes being mixed, the releases are also not highlighted. I suggest you make a study for a more practical layout and with greater visibility of the themes being launched and the works with a promotional price
Dear sir,

I hereby express my opinion about the bookstore.

What strikes me the most when entering the bookstore is the atmosphere, the decor, tones, lights and relaxing music, which
make
the environment
extremely
cozy.

Another
positive
point is the vast choice of books on
different
topics, for all types of audiences.

Undoubtedly
, the freedom to analyze a work with all the comfort of the sofas available in the reading area is a factor that
adds
positively
. To complete, the installation of the cafeteria with several types of coffees and snacks
makes
customers have a great experience.

I don't
really
like the layout of how the books
are located
,
in addition
to the themes
being mixed
, the releases are
also
not highlighted. I suggest you
make
a study for a more practical layout and with greater visibility of the themes
being launched
and the works with a promotional
price
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IELTS letter Customer Suggestion to Bookstore owner

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  American English
6 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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