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Write a letter to your friend telling them about the film. Explain why you enjoyed it and recommend that they see it.

Write a letter to your friend telling them about the film. Explain why you enjoyed it and recommend that they see it. M32Mk
Dear John, I’m writing this letter to share my experience of watching an excellent movie last weekend. The title of the movie is “Avengers: End Game”. As my past time, looking on my Facebook, I view it on one of my colleague’s timelines whereas had a good review. Furthermore, there are so many likes and shares. I have searched on the web and found out that it is one of Marvel’s movies which, by experience, all of their movies have high ratings and gross sales. Since, I had subscribed to Netflix last month, and it is available, I decided to watch it with my girlfriend. At the start, the setting is in the Avengers headquarters will all the superheroes. The headquarter was massive with a lot of different aircraft and high-end cars. This shows that the producer spent a hundred of million dollars to make the movie more reality. All costumes of the superheroes were in fine detail. One of the scene, is in space, it looks real like solar systems, spaceships and different spacecraft. I don’t to tell you the ending so will be become excited to watch it. I highly recommend this movie. I suggest that you watch this with your girlfriend will popcorn and soda. Your Friend, Orlie
Dear John,

I’m writing this letter to share my experience of watching an excellent
movie
last weekend.

The title of the
movie
is “Avengers:
End
Game”. As my
past time
, looking on my Facebook, I view it on one of my colleague’s timelines whereas had a
good
review.
Furthermore
, there are
so
many
likes and shares. I have searched on the web and found out that it is one of Marvel’s
movies
which, by experience, all of their
movies
have high ratings and gross sales. Since, I had subscribed to Netflix last month, and it is available, I decided to
watch
it with my girlfriend.

At the
start
, the setting is in
the Avengers
headquarters will all the superheroes. The
headquarter
was massive with
a lot of
different
aircraft and high-
end
cars. This
shows
that the producer spent a hundred of million dollars to
make
the
movie
more reality. All costumes of the superheroes were in fine detail. One of the scene, is in space, it looks real like solar systems, spaceships and
different
spacecraft. I don’t to
tell
you the ending
so
will
be become
excited to
watch
it.

I
highly
recommend this
movie
.
I
suggest that you
watch
this with your girlfriend will popcorn and soda.

Your Friend,

Orlie
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend telling them about the film. Explain why you enjoyed it and recommend that they see it.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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