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One of your friends plans to go sightseeing in your country. You used to live in a place that you think she might enjoy visiting. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: Briefly describe the attractions of this place. Recommend accommodation. And suggest what she/he should take.

One of your friends plans to go sightseeing in your country. You used to live in a place that you think she might enjoy visiting. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: Briefly describe the attractions of this place. Recommend accommodation. And suggest what she/he should take. N3Nlq
Dear Radha, How’re you? Hope you’re hale and hearty. I’m extremely pleased as you’re coming to visit my nation. We can spend some quality time after a long time. I can’t wait to receive you at the airport. I guess this is your first time visit to India. India is a vast country. There are large numbers of places which are quite famous not only in India but also abroad continents. One of them is Golden temple in Punjab where mostly i visit. As this temple made by gold, you should visit it. Apart from that, the statue of unity also worthwhile location to explore. Hence, this the world tallest statue. Provided that you want to stay at my home, you must stay at my home. We would be happy to serve you. It’s your choice. There are even other hotels available. It’s easy on the pocket rate. I think, Taj hotel can be better for you as it’s 5 start hotel. You’ll get all modern amenities. I advice you that don’t forget to bring some warm clothes as the winter is setting in. If you need any medicine also bring it as we can’t find h your medicine in my country. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours friend, Deepak
Dear
Radha
,

How’re you? Hope you’re hale and hearty. I’m
extremely
pleased
as you’re coming to
visit
my nation. We can spend
some
quality time after a long time. I can’t wait to receive you at the airport.

I guess this is your
first
time
visit
to India. India is a vast country. There are large numbers of places which are quite
famous
not
only
in India
but
also
abroad continents. One of them is Golden temple in Punjab where
mostly
i
visit
. As this temple made by gold, you should
visit
it. Apart from that, the statue of unity
also
worthwhile location to explore.
Hence
, this the world tallest statue.

Provided that you want to stay at my home, you
must
stay at my home. We would be happy to serve you. It’s your choice. There are even other hotels available. It’s easy on the pocket rate. I
think
,
Taj
hotel can be better for you as it’s 5
start
hotel. You’ll
get
all modern amenities.

I
advice
you that don’t forget to bring
some
warm clothes as the winter is setting in. If you need any medicine
also
bring it as we can’t find h your medicine in my country.

I am looking forward to seeing you
soon
.

Yours friend,

Deepak
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IELTS letter One of your friends plans to go sightseeing in your country. You used to live in a place that you think she might enjoy visiting. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should: Briefly describe the attractions of this place. Recommend accommodation. And suggest what she/he should take.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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