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Movie to recommend to a friend

Movie to recommend to a friend N3NmN

Dear John, I’m writing this letter to share my experience of watching an excellent movie last weekend. The title of the movie is “Avengers: End Game”. As my past time, looking on my Facebook, I view it on one of my colleague’s timelines whereas had a good review. Furthermore, there are so many likes and shares. I have searched on the web and found out that it is one of Marvel’s movies which, by experience, all of their movies have high ratings and gross sales. Since, I had subscribed to Netflix last month, and it is available, I decided to watch it with my girlfriend. The setting is in the Avengers headquarters will all the superheroes at the start. The headquarter was massive, with many different aircraft and high-end cars. This shows that the producer spent a hundred million dollars to make the movie more realistic. All costumes of the superheroes were in fine detail. One of the scenes is in space; it looks like solar systems, spaceships and different spacecraft. I don’t want to tell you the ending to become excited to watch it. I highly recommend this movie. I suggest that you watch this with your girlfriend will popcorn and soda. Your Friend, Orlie

Dear John,

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movie
 last weekend.

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movie
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movies
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movies
 have high ratings and gross sales. Since, I had subscribed to Netflix last month, and it is available, I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
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I highly
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I
 suggest that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 this with your girlfriend will popcorn and soda.

Your Friend,

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