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write a letter to your friend seeking advice about your work

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Dear mayank, How are you? I hope this letter finds you in radiant health. I secured job in mnc. I am writing this letter to get advice form you about my work. Recently I have got job as department head in tata technologies. I have to manage whole department and also documentation part. It is great responsibility on my shoulder ever. In more my colleague is on medical leave so I have to look his work. I am extremely happy getting this opportunities but same time I feel embarrass how I can manage all and give efficient out put. Suggest some way how I can handle other part of company which is not related to my field. Also need some guidance to deal with higher authority related work. As I know you have been working same field since many years and have been performing well soyou have vast experience of various situation. I think you are the best for me to advice than others. Take care of you and your family. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours affectionately, jignesh
Dear
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mayank
,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you in radiant health. I secured job in
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mnc
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
advice form you about my work.

Recently I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
job as department head in
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tata
technologies. I
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have to
manage whole department and
also
documentation part. It is great responsibility on my shoulder ever. In more my colleague is on medical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
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so
I
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have to
look his work.

I am
extremely
happy getting
Did you mean "these"?
this
opportunities
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but
same time I feel embarrass how I can manage all and give efficient out put. Suggest
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
way how I can handle other part of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
which is not related to my field.
Also
need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
guidance to deal with higher authority related work.

As I know you have been working same field since
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
years and have been performing well
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soyou
have vast experience of various situation. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
you are the best for me to advice than others.

Take care of you and your family. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours
affectionately
,

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jignesh

IELTS letter write a letter to your friend seeking advice about your work

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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