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write a letter to your friend seeking advice about your work

write a letter to your friend seeking advice about your work XGLYg

Dear mayank, How are you? I hope this letter finds you in radiant health. I secured job in mnc. I am writing this letter to get advice form you about my work. Recently I have got job as department head in tata technologies. I have to manage whole department and also documentation part. It is great responsibility on my shoulder ever. In more my colleague is on medical leave so I have to look his work. I am extremely happy getting this opportunities but same time I feel embarrass how I can manage all and give efficient out put. Suggest some way how I can handle other part of company which is not related to my field. Also need some guidance to deal with higher authority related work. As I know you have been working same field since many years and have been performing well soyou have vast experience of various situation. I think you are the best for me to advice than others. Take care of you and your family. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours affectionately, jignesh

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.MayanMayansma yank
mayank
,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you in radiant health. I secured job in Possible spelling mistake found.MacMSCUNCCNCMBCMDC
mnc
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 advice form you about my work.

Recently I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 job as department head in Possible spelling mistake found.TatadatataxaIATATateTatar
tata
 technologies. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 manage whole department and also
 documentation part. It is great responsibility on my shoulder ever. In more my colleague is on medical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 look his work.

I am extremely
 happy getting Did you mean "these"?these
this
 opportunities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 same time I feel embarrass how I can manage all and give efficient out put. Suggest This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 way how I can handle other part of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 which is not related to my field. Also
 need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 guidance to deal with higher authority related work.

As I know you have been working same field since This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years and have been performing well Possible spelling mistake found.so you
soyou
 have vast experience of various situation. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you are the best for me to advice than others.

Take care of you and your family. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours affectionately
,

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jignesh