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write a letter to your friend, invite hin/her public event in your country. describe the public event. explain other plan you have your firnd when she will visit

write a letter to your friend, invite hin/her public event in your country. describe the public event. explain other plan you have your firnd when she will visit d5RgE
Dear RabiaI hope you are well and enjoying your work with good health. It has been a long time since i met you. i missed the time i spent with in Kunming, China Lab, . Student period of life is memorable time. I give you an invitation. Actually, me and Ayesha is planning a tour of Northern areas of Pakistan with some other friend. our tour will be expected in first week of July but it will be finalize after your intimation. Area areas of Gilgilt Baltistan like, Naran, kaghan, shindur, Hunza will be expected to visit because in mid of July their are different festival organized there, especially polo match in shindur is very famous there and different people from the different area of county visited just to watch polo match. But my tour will not completed without you because i know you love to visit mountainous areas, hiking, camping and try different tradition foods. it would be a great opportunity for us to take a break from our busy work scheduled and again enjoy together. i really hope, you will be able to come over and write back soon, Best RegardsAmara
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good
health. It has been a long time since
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met you.
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i
missed the time
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spent with in Kunming, China Lab
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areas
of Pakistan with
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some
other friend.
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our
tour will be
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expected
in
first
week of July
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but
it will be
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finalize
after your intimation.
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Area
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areas
of
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Gilgilt
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Baltistan
like,
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Naran
,
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kaghan
,
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shindur
,
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Hunza
will be
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expected
to visit
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because
in mid of July
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are
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different
festival organized there,
especially
polo match in
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shindur
is
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very
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famous
there and
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different
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people
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different
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area
of county visited
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just
to
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watch
polo match.
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my tour will not
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completed
without you
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because
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i
know you
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love
to visit mountainous
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areas
, hiking, camping and try
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different
tradition foods.
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it
would be a great opportunity for us to take a break from our busy work scheduled and again enjoy together.
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i
really
hope, you will be able to
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come
over and write back
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soon
, Best
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RegardsAmara
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend, invite hin/her public event in your country. describe the public event. explain other plan you have your firnd when she will visit

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5.5
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