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write a letter to your friend, invite hin/her public event in your country. describe the public event. explain other plan you have your firnd when she will visit

write a letter to your friend, invite hin/her public event in your country. describe the public event. explain other plan you have your firnd when she will visit d5RgE
Dear RabiaI hope you are well and enjoying your work with good health. It has been a long time since i met you. i missed the time i spent with in Kunming, China Lab, . Student period of life is memorable time. I give you an invitation. Actually, me and Ayesha is planning a tour of Northern areas of Pakistan with some other friend. our tour will be expected in first week of July but it will be finalize after your intimation. Area areas of Gilgilt Baltistan like, Naran, kaghan, shindur, Hunza will be expected to visit because in mid of July their are different festival organized there, especially polo match in shindur is very famous there and different people from the different area of county visited just to watch polo match. But my tour will not completed without you because i know you love to visit mountainous areas, hiking, camping and try different tradition foods. it would be a great opportunity for us to take a break from our busy work scheduled and again enjoy together. i really hope, you will be able to come over and write back soon, Best RegardsAmara
Dear
RabiaI
hope you are well and enjoying your work with
good
health. It has been a long time since
i
met you.
i
missed the time
i
spent with in Kunming, China Lab
, .
Student period of life is memorable time. I give you an invitation. Actually, me and Ayesha is planning a tour of Northern
areas
of Pakistan with
some
other friend.
our
tour will be
expected
in
first
week of July
but
it will be
finalize
after your intimation.
Area
areas
of
Gilgilt
Baltistan
like,
Naran
,
kaghan
,
shindur
,
Hunza
will be
expected
to visit
because
in mid of July
their
are
different
festival organized there,
especially
polo match in
shindur
is
very
famous
there and
different
people
from the
different
area
of county visited
just
to
watch
polo match.
But
my tour will not
completed
without you
because
i
know you
love
to visit mountainous
areas
, hiking, camping and try
different
tradition foods.
it
would be a great opportunity for us to take a break from our busy work scheduled and again enjoy together.
i
really
hope, you will be able to
come
over and write back
soon
, Best
RegardsAmara
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend, invite hin/her public event in your country. describe the public event. explain other plan you have your firnd when she will visit

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
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