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write a letter to your friend who live in other country. invite him in your country to tradition events

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Dear Rabia I hope you are well and enjoying your work with good health. It has been a long time since I met you. I missed the time I spent with in Kunming, China Lab Student period of life is memorable time. I give you an invitation. Actually, me and Ayesha is planning a tour of Northern areas of Pakistan with a number of other friend. Our tour will be expected in first week of July on the contrary it will be finalized after your intimation. Area areas of Gilgilt Baltistan like, Naran, kaghan, shindur, Hunza will be expected to visit due to the fact in mid of July there are various festival organized there, especially polo match in shindur is extremely well-known there and various people from the various area of county visited merely to watch polo match. But my tour will not complete without you because I know you love to visit mountainous areas, hiking, camping and try different tradition foods. It would be a great opportunity for us to take a break from our busy work scheduled and again enjoy together. I hope, you will be able to come over and write back soon, Best Regards Amara
Dear
Rabia
I hope you are well and enjoying your work with
good
health. It has been a long time since I met you. I missed the time I spent with in Kunming, China Lab Student period of life is memorable time. I give you an invitation. Actually, me and Ayesha is planning a tour of Northern
areas
of Pakistan with a number of other friend. Our tour will be
expected
in
first
week of July
on the contrary
it will
be finalized
after your intimation.
Area
areas
of
Gilgilt
Baltistan


like,
Naran
,
kaghan
,
shindur
,
Hunza


will be
expected


to visit due to the fact in mid of July there are various
festival


organized there,
especially


polo match in
shindur


is
extremely


well-known there and various
people


from the various
area
of county visited
merely


to
watch


polo
match.
But


my tour will not complete without you
because


I

know

you
love


to visit mountainous
areas
, hiking, camping and try
different


tradition
foods. It would be a great opportunity for us to take a break from our busy work scheduled and again enjoy together. I hope, you will be able to
come


over and write back
soon
, Best Regards
Amara
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend who live in other country. invite him in your country to tradition events

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  American English
18 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
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