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You have recently bought air conditioner and it doesn't work properly

You have recently bought air conditioner and it doesn't work properly gY6nL

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to complain about the air conditioner which I recently bought from your store. On the 5th of June I visited one of your local shop in order to buy an air conditioner for my home. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a sales assistant about it. After getting all necessary information I decided to purchase it. Three days later things started to go wrong. When I used the conditioner for the first time it worked properly and cooled the room very quickly. However, after two days when I turned the air conditioner on it started to blow hot air. I tried to adjust the air degree but the remote control did not work either. I would like you to replace the air conditioner with well functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately I will be forced to report this Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully, Ben Hopkins

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to complain about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 conditioner which I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your store. On the 5th of June I visited one of your local shop in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 conditioner for my home. Looking around the shop I encountered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 item and I asked a sales assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all necessary information I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. Three days later things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the conditioner for the first
 time it worked properly
 and cooled the room This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
quickly
. However
, after two days when I turned the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 conditioner on it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to blow hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
. I tried to adjust the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 degree This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the remote control did not work either. I would like you to replace the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 conditioner with well functioning one. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, unfortunately I will be forced
 to report this Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully
, Ben Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphHopkins.Hopkins!Hopkins?Hopkins:Hopkins,Hopkins;
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