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Regarding the issue of rising prices of all things.

Regarding the issue of rising prices of all things. D6RnW
Respected Sir/MadamThrough the extremed problem of your newspaper I want to highlight the issue of rising prices in our daily life. Day by day the prices of things are increasing. How can a poor family run his house in such inflation? There is not even a common man's salary as much as the prices of things are increasing. Even if a poor person earns money by working in someone's place, money goes in one meel only. They can not provide good service to their children in such inflation, can not educate them, cannot buy new clothes because the inflation is so much that they do not have money left to meet their needs. Looking forward I hope you will highlight the issue in your extreme newspaper as soon as possible
Respected Sir/
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MadamThrough
the
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problem of your newspaper I want to highlight the issue of rising prices in our daily life. Day by day the prices of things are increasing. How can a poor family run his
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house
in such inflation? There is not even a common
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man
's salary as much as the prices of things are increasing. Even if a poor person earns money by working in someone's place, money goes in one
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meel
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only
. They can not provide
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good
service to their children in such inflation, can not educate them, cannot
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buy
new clothes
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because
the inflation is
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so
much that they do not have money
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left
to
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meet
their needs. Looking forward I hope you will highlight the issue in your extreme newspaper as
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soon
as
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
possible

IELTS letter Regarding the issue of rising prices of all things.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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