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There are several Complaints about the reception area where visotors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked for suggestions -write lettre to your manager.

There are several Complaints about the reception area where visotors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked for suggestions -write lettre to your manager. ABMmL

Dear Sir, Madam, I am writing to this letter about improvement in reception are because visitors make complaints about it. There are many complaints that people say about this area. The receptionist does not give proper answers of them, so they get frustrated, and they have to sit for many hours too or they have to wait for many days for their work. This particular region is very vital for organisations because people who come to visit our place, get proper information about our firm, and they also join with our company, so we get profits. The improvement of this area is made, by giving proper training to this place's person that how to respond with any visitors, the manners that they should have to develop by taking this position. Some practices are needed, and also observations onto them. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jayshree Parmar

Dear Sir, Madam,

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because
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make
 complaints about it.

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so
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get
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have to
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have to
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very
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because
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people
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come
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get
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join
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company
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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get
 profits.

The improvement of this area is made
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have to
 develop by taking this position. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 practices are needed
, and also
 observations onto them.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

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Jayshree
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