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There are several Complaints about the reception area where visotors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked for suggestions -write lettre to your manager.

There are several Complaints about the reception area where visotors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked for suggestions -write lettre to your manager. ABMmL
Dear Sir, Madam, I am writing to this letter about improvement in reception are because visitors make complaints about it. There are many complaints that people say about this area. The receptionist does not give proper answers of them, so they get frustrated, and they have to sit for many hours too or they have to wait for many days for their work. This particular region is very vital for organisations because people who come to visit our place, get proper information about our firm, and they also join with our company, so we get profits. The improvement of this area is made, by giving proper training to this place's person that how to respond with any visitors, the manners that they should have to develop by taking this position. Some practices are needed, and also observations onto them. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jayshree Parmar
Dear Sir, Madam,

I am writing to this letter about improvement in reception are
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visitors
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make
complaints about it.

There are
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complaints that
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people
say about this area. The receptionist does not give proper answers of them,
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so
they
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get
frustrated, and they
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have to
sit for
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hours
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too or
they
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have to
wait for
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days for their work.

This particular region is
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very
vital for
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organisations
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because
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people
who
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come
to visit our place,
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get
proper information about our firm, and they
also
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join
with our
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company
,
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so
we
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get
profits.

The improvement of this area
is made
, by giving proper training to this place's person that how to respond with any visitors, the manners that they should
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have to
develop by taking this position.
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Some
practices
are needed
, and
also
observations onto them.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Jayshree
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Parmar
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IELTS letter There are several Complaints about the reception area where visotors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked for suggestions -write lettre to your manager.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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