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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for holidays. Explain your travel plans, describe the interesting places you plan to visit, ask for suggestions for sightseeing options

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for holidays. Explain your travel plans, describe the interesting places you plan to visit, ask for suggestions for sightseeing options 0kaO

Dear Matt, I am writing to you because I have an important new for you, I requested a holidays from my current job and, today I received the approval this mean I am going to visit you in two weeks I am excited to travel to Canada. Before start my journey and, arrive to your town Toronto, I would like to stay two nights in Montreal I was doing some research and I found that in this city the hotels are amazing, After that I would like to past for Ontario and visit the museums around. Finally I am going to land into your town I have a lot interest in know more about your culture and food, I hear that people spend time in the restaurants tasted different kind of dishes I hope we can do the same and, I am ready for practice my French with you I have been taking lesson at the University I hope it works very well. On the other hand, could you please let me know if there are some festivals or maybe sport activities that we can do together? I am ready for the adventure, we can visit new places around to your area and do camping trip and have the perfect summer this year. I can wait for see you soon. All the best, Lucy.

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 new for you, I requested Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a holiday" or simply "holidays"?a holidayholidays
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 from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
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 job and, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
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 I received the approval this mean I am going to visit you in two weeks I am excited
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 my journey and, arrive to your town Toronto, I would like to stay two nights in Montreal I was doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 research and I found that in this city the hotels are amazing, After that I would like to past for Ontario and visit the museums around. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
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 kind of dishes I hope we can do the same and, I am ready for practice my French with Consider adding a comma here.you,
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, could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
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let
 me know if there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 festivals or maybe sport activities that we can do together? I am ready for the adventure, we can visit new places around to your area and do camping trip and have the perfect summer this year.

I can wait for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
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. All the best, Lucy. 