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Application for Senior Business Development Manager

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Vishwanath Pratap Singh D1/54, gold croft cghs, Dwarka, delhi, 110075 +919648090066 vishwanath. pratapsingh@outlook. com Zalando SE Laura Fernandaz Bueno Berlin Delhi, July 30, 2021 Application for Senior Business Development Manager (w/m/d) Dear Laura, My name is Vishwanath Pratap Singh and I am applying for a Senior Business Development Manager (w/m/d) role at Zalando SE. This position will enable me to work in an area of primary interest of mine, which is Business Development. Furthermore, Zalando SE fulfils most of the aspects which I look for in a possible employer such as: company with strong moral values & integrity, delivering value to the clients, strong culture of creative ideation, problem solving and teamwork, and emphasis on inclusive culture and technology. In my current role in India, I started a new business in mining in 2017. Along with our team, I built an income stream whose revenue stand today at 37. 01million (USD). It took us five years to achieve this milestone in difficult working condition. My work involved managing the project, arranging project finance and infrastructure, and overcoming operational risks by analyzing daily production data, always working with the stakeholders to provide efficient service. I believe in teamwork as it helps to deliver quality work and we can learn from each other while working in a team. My education in engineering, management, and finance, provided sound foundation to develop that new business. I believe that my work experience in building a business from scratch to a scale, could be good fit for advertised job role. My expertise can be utilized in scaling a business idea, production efficiency and planning, and project management. I enjoy challenges and working in the fast paced environment. I appreciate the time that you took to review my credentials. Best regards, Vishwanath Pratap Singh
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Delhi, July 30, 2021

Application for Senior
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Development Manager (w/m/d)

Dear Laura,

My name is
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Vishwanath
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Pratap
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Singh and
I am applying for a Senior
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Business
Development Manager (w/m/d) role at Zalando SE. This position will enable me to
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work
in an area of primary interest of mine, which is
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Business
Development.
Furthermore
, Zalando SE
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fulfils
most of the aspects which I look for in a possible employer such as:
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company
with strong moral values & integrity, delivering value to the clients, strong culture of creative ideation, problem solving and teamwork, and emphasis on inclusive culture and technology.

In my
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current
role in India, I
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started
a new
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business
in mining in 2017. Along with our team, I built an income stream whose revenue stand
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today
at 37. 01million (USD). It took us five years to achieve this milestone in difficult
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working
condition. My
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work
involved managing the project, arranging project finance and infrastructure, and overcoming operational
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risks
by analyzing daily production data, always
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working
with the stakeholders to provide efficient service. I believe in teamwork as it
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helps
to deliver quality
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work and
we can learn from each other while
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working
in a team. My education in engineering, management, and finance, provided sound foundation to develop that new business.

I believe that my
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work
experience in building a
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business
from scratch to a scale, could be
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good
fit for advertised job role. My expertise can
be utilized
in scaling a
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business
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idea
, production efficiency and planning, and project management. I enjoy challenges and
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working
in the
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fast
paced environment.

I appreciate the time that you took to review my credentials.

Best regards,

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5.5
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