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Write a letter to your friend for a job opening in your country.

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Dear Melissa, How’s it going? I’m writing to you with some wonderful news! Remember when we spoke last time over the phone you had told me to keep an eye out for human resources’ positions in my city? I’m excited to tell you that there has been an opening at my husband’s consulting company, and I think that you’ll be perfect for it! The current HR manager is moving to New York, U. S. A. in two months and the company immediately needs someone to fill in the position. This is a full-time position, where the candidate is required to keep a track of the number of hours worked by the staff, interview potential candidates for various roles in the company, provide training to new employees, as well as participate in the orientation process. You will also be responsible to disburse petty cash to employees in addition to ensuring that they get their salaries on time. Since you have a Bachelor’s in human resources and Marketing as well as prior experience working for consulting firms, I thought this would appeal to you! If you’re interested or wish to know more about the position, send an email to their recruitment manager; her email address is eva. levinson@sprintzconsulting. ca. Write to me soon! Lots of love, Rosie
Dear Melissa,

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in my city? I’m excited to
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that you’ll be perfect for it!

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HR manager is moving to New York, U. S. A. in two months and the
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company
immediately needs someone to fill in the
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. This is a full-time
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of the number of hours worked by the staff, interview potential candidates for various roles in the
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, provide training to new employees,
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their salaries on time.

Since you have a Bachelor’s in human resources and Marketing
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this would appeal to you! If you’re interested or wish to know more about the
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Write to me
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Rosie
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend for a job opening in your country.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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