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Write a letter to your friend asking information about LOndon. write why are you going to LOndon, What do you do there when do you do there, and ask what do you want to know

Write a letter to your friend asking information about LOndon. write why are you going to LOndon, What do you do there when do you do there, and ask what do you want to know Oydek
Dear Madina, I am writing to ask some information about London, where I have never been and my new job is related there. My occupation starts on August 16, 2022. I and my family are going to go there on August 10. So that I would like to obtain some following information: 1. THE distance between London and Uzbekistan. 2. What kind of transport is more confident for getting there? Train or plain? 3. Airline or railway names, numbers and arrival times. 4. Name and location the hotel which you have booked. 5. What kind of clothes are much more suitable for the weather. As for my job is an interpreter that I have been working for 7 years in Uzbekistan. The British company made a contract with our company for 5 years in 2021. Hence, we will have been there till 2027. I would be grateful If you could send the above mentioned information to my e-mail. I would like to receive it as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Your best friend, Dilfu
Dear
Madina
,

I am writing to ask
some
information about London, where I have never been and my new job
is related
there.

My occupation
starts
on August 16, 2022. I and my family are going to go there on August 10.
So
that I would like to obtain
some
following information:

1. THE distance between London and Uzbekistan.

2. What kind of transport is more confident for getting there? Train or plain?

3. Airline or railway names, numbers and arrival times.

4. Name and location the hotel which you have booked.

5. What kind of clothes are much more suitable for the weather.

As for my job is an interpreter that I have been working for 7 years in Uzbekistan. The British
company
made a contract with our
company
for 5 years in 2021.
Hence
, we will have been there till 2027.

I would be grateful If you could
send
the above mentioned information to my e-mail.

I would like to receive it as
soon
as possible.
I
look forward to hearing from you.

Your best friend,

Dilfu
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend asking information about LOndon. write why are you going to LOndon, What do you do there when do you do there, and ask what do you want to know

Letter
  American English
13 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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