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Letter to airlines for the bag you left in the plane

Letter to airlines for the bag you left in the plane 3LBLb

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in regard to enquire about a hand bag which I left in your plane while travelling from New Delhi to London on 25th September. It was a long day for me as I had to attend a couple of meetings at my office before boarding my flight due to which I was tired and while departing completely missed to take my hand bag which I kept below my seat. For reference, my flight number was MG1245 and seat number was G12. It is a black medium-size bag from Gucci and as I purchased it last month only, it is still new with no scratches or marks. The bag has $200, a pen and some personal items. I hope you would be able to find the bag with the description provided above and fine to courier it to the address mentioned at the back of this letter. I would look forward to a positive response soon. Yours faithfully, Sam Thomas

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in regard to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about a hand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 in your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 while travelling from New Delhi to London on 25th September.

It was a long day for me as I had to attend a couple of meetings at my office This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 boarding my flight due to which I was tired
 and while departing completely The verb 'missed' is used with the gerund form: "missed taking".missed taking
missed to take
 my hand You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 below my seat. For reference, my flight number was MG1245 and seat number was G12.

It is a black medium-size You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 from Gucci and as I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 it last month This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
, it is still
 new with no scratches or marks. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 has $200, a pen and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 personal items.

I hope you would be able to find the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 with the description provided above and fine to courier it to the address mentioned at the back of this letter.

I would look forward to a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Sam Thomas